Date: 2007-01-04 07:12 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] waveform-delta.livejournal.com
I like how you handle Kronk. We're playing him as a big sweet lug, which is fun, and strangely appropriate.

I would encourage you to trim his speech down even more. I try to get him talking like Tonto, Frankenstein, etc. So "Kronk sure you not here to talk with him," is pretty good; but "You not here talk with Kronk," is even a little better.

But that's nitpicking (again). Overall, this is money, baby: run wi' it!
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