Nice. I like the interaction between Seledra and Isioleth. The only quibble I have is that the little Valen reference doesn't quite work for me. It's almost a little too prescient for Seledra to just come up with that. Maybe if she mentioned a couple of other races and then said tiefling. I dunno.
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Date: 2008-06-05 09:55 pm (UTC)From: